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What she said, what he didn't by ~HPluver93:iconHPluver93:



Whenever she was near him she felt sick to her stomach,

For him he wanted to be anywhere else but there,

She kept trying to bring him closer to her,

He thought she was just doing what normal girls did,

She kept seeing him watch her from the corner of his eye,

He was just checking to see what the day’s homework was,

She always dreamed about him at night,

He dreamt of every thing, accept her,

She loved his smile,

He hardly thought twice about it,

She knew that if she didn’t do some thing she would never get the chance,

He knew that if he didn’t do some thing his life would never be the same,

She decided to take action,

He also decided to do some thing,

She saw him every where the next day at school,

He knew that her following him wasn’t normal,

She ran into him in the hallway after lunch,

He purposely ran into her after lunch,

She asked him if he wanted to go to the dance on Friday

He said that he wouldn’t be anywhere else with any other girl.
©2007-2010 ~HPluver93
:iconhpluver93:

Author's Comments

I never thought that I would write some thign so random! I really hope youall like this one, cause I'm still not so sure about it. :heart:

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:iconrhionne:
Cool :) Good storytoo :heart:

But I believe it should be except instead of Accept :)
:icontsong-ming-yi:
...Sounds familiar:blush:....

Oh, and 's right, it should be except.

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I love you,
I love you,
I love you.
You. Forever and always. I give you my heart and my word.
:iconhpluver93:
ok so i can't spellllllllllllll big deal!!! but thanx I'm not sure where it came from, I wrote it this morning at 5:30am

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Hey, see that chick up there on stage??? Yup that's meh ^^


I'll be on Broadway someday:heart:


Don't forget to listen for my voice on the radio:sing:
:icontsong-ming-yi:
:D

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I love you,
I love you,
I love you.
You. Forever and always. I give you my heart and my word.
:iconhpluver93:
:nod:

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Hey, see that chick up there on stage??? Yup that's meh ^^


I'll be on Broadway someday:heart:


Don't forget to listen for my voice on the radio:sing:
:icond-bird:
Great job! :wow: This poem is sooo amazing! I remember when I felt like this... :cries: Anyhoo, I'm gonna fav this 'cause it's totally AWESOME!

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~*~ Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but the moments that take our breath away ~*~

I'm in this poetry club: [link]
:iconhpluver93:
I've felt like this many times before, it sucks! Any way thanx for the awesome comment and the fav.!!!

--
Hey, see that chick up there on stage??? Yup that's meh ^^


I'll be on Broadway someday:heart:


Don't forget to listen for my voice on the radio:sing:
:icond-bird:
U are totally welcome! =D U totally deserve it! :aww: Keep up the outstanding work!

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~*~ Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but the moments that take our breath away ~*~

I'm in this poetry club: [link]
:iconmonstredave:
awwwwww
the first part reminded me of my personal experiences thinkn about a certain someone at night...hehe

im not so comfortable with the ending...its too abrupt

but other than that its sweet

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